BluGil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[i am going to kill you]

OH for christs sake

Take the violin down an octave before my fucking ears bleed

bryce responds:

no~

[Party Party Fun Time]

Hi der you must be new.jpg

I'm not going to really get into specifics here, just, keep practicing and you'll learn on your own. This is a decent start if your new to this (FL Im guessing?)

Also I can hear the default snare and the arpeggio from a synth ive used. dont use premade arp's:P

zRiffz responds:

I actually didn't use any arps... That was like a simple note pattern... I noticed that it in fact did sound like an arp though...

[Feel Great Inc (Jazz)]

tits n shit

Its a good idea its just a little tooooo far off from the original song. Get the melody of the vocals in there. I like the plucky guitar, reminds me of Wind Waker songs

BowserThedestructive responds:

Its meant to be far off from the orignal Mainly because i added my own touch to it diced notes 4/4 'ed some notes and made some totally different not to absurdly but still Its meant to be a chill version. I only added the "feel good" section from the a capella i found to it sense it fit with a bit of work has for vocals syncing i cannot do that Ill give it a try and upload a seperate version but has far has i know i cant sync them the midi and the orignal is different timings.. Plus the..well there different haha but ill try just for you ^.^

[Security Breach (Collab)]

That bass

Toooo much power in this song, its overwhelming and incredibly distorted. it just sounds like a really thick white noise.

RealityVictim responds:

Well in my opinion i partially agree, but mastering with the bass was kind've hard. I think for what i could do, i did the best i could with it. Thanks.

[PL-BAHAD (instrumental)]

good ideas, not fond of the sound

FL Slayer with a phaser? haha, interesting

Is this all made in FL Studio?

RealityVictim responds:

Yes, and it's not just slayer. I used alot of different slayer guitars with tweaked sounds, not phased though. Lol thanks.

[Bass Hunter Remixes]

Meh

Taking the melody and using it doesnt constitute a good remix at all. You need to take the time to select GOOD synths and samples that dont sound like midi/8bit shit.

I guess you did alright with the melody though

Zmandestroyer responds:

Ya this is just a small thing i will make it wayyyy better.

[Terminal (Instrumental)]

Just one thing

Work out the levels better on your preamp before recording so theres a fuller sound for the guitar, its coming through as mostly trebles, and they don't penetrate enough to really hear the melody clearly. You need to give it a little more bass and mid so that itll sound really chunky.

Lashmush responds:

i've cut some dBs off the mids to get a more deathmetal sound in general for the album. its not primarily melodic in nature so this one track is more an exception to the general brutality the album will offer.

thanks alot for the feedback though.

[Equalized [prog Metal]]

Sick,

Theres a really deep harmony in there, not with just like 2 notes but it sounds like 4 or something, which is really sick. Sounds nice and full. melodic, but still brutal. Make a song dammit!

Robot-Lock responds:

Yeah. There are two channels of harmonizing lines, two channels of power chords, and one channel with some very high pitched chords. Other than that, it's just bass and drums. Thanks for the review.

[Ode to Stove]

Really annoying

I don't know why your screaming like that but it's annoying as shit.

Also theres nothing going on in your song but like a couple chords and a double bass drum. Which is definitely not classic rock.

DruoxtheShredder responds:

Yeah, double bass isn't in classic rock because Ledd Zeppelin never happened.

[StereoBlast]

Pretty sick

That's a real sick wobbly synth you've got going. However the intro goes on a bit too long man.

The second melody, if i were you i'd change that synth or just distort it and make it a bit squarer.

Get a little bit more going on and this shitll be pro.

Wanna return the favor and check out my new track?:)

DeltaClaw responds:

Thanks for the review, and I will now go check your new track =).