Hahahaha

Oh my god I love it, thanks so much, I'm honored you used my song<3

Not too bad

Decently animated. Try using a smoother brush. Also be more careful about not breathing into the mic. Pretty good voice acting though.

Couldn't even sit through it...

Poorly animated sprites, obnoxious sound effects, and the slowest story ever. Id love to offer something positive but theres really nothing. sorry.

Lol

Its beautiful, funny and entertaining

Cool idea

Nice idea and decently executed but the aesthetics are completely offsetting

cool

It's a cool idea, pretty original. It's like finger twister. fun little gimmick.

Fill it up

Lots of empty spaces, gotta fill up the track, know what i mean? more instruments and drums and shit. just needs more work haha

solid piece

I listened to a few of your songs, and I must say, i love your use of samples. Those little snippets of random sound just make a song so much better with the added intricacy. Anyways cool track, but I'm not too fond of that snare sound, doesn't fit in with the tribal sound.

uhm read my review:)

My only complaint is how much its leaning into the treble. I'd like it more with a fuller bass and mid section, cause it sounds a little squeaky how it is now.

Ew

Seriously? Come on. Learn anatomy, learn traditional, then stylize.

Its NOT watch animu, draw animu, draw animu naked fucking eachother in a goth world. Its just not art. Its kinda pathetic and it doesn't get you anywhere except fanpages all over the internet.

Theres just such an atrocious lack of detail, i mean even just the shapes - the face, that sickly waist. and that sideboob is like an undulating shiny mass. Looks to me like your ight source is on the left, but you decided to make everything shine just for the hell of it. Even going so far as to put some boob-shine in the middle of a boob-shadow.

The girl in the front, her rib cage curves outwards. Her right butt cheek protrudes and apparently is flat and has no curvature. her chin protrudes an extra few inches and ends in a knifelike tip. what the fuck is going on here man.

Its got a nice feel to it

It's got like a nostalgic winnie-the-pooh feel to it. It's kinda cool. However I think it could do with less matte surfaces and more texture. Also something about the placing of the birds nest is... odd. I mean in terms of perspective. It looks like it should be smaller, especially considering the perspective of that tree its on

Well

Looks to be unfinished. Textures on the man and the rocks are too stark. They need more blending and the rocks need more... rockiness. They look like folds of cloth. Give them more of a grainyness.

The woman looks a bit mannish but that does admittedly fit in with the art of the period (Not to sound like some historically accurate prick or anything).

One thing that really jumps out at me is the red cloth. It looks f'in wicked. Angular yet still soft. And the color just jumps. cool shit.

Also watch her elbow... just an awkwardly jutting angle there.