Hahahaha
Oh my god I love it, thanks so much, I'm honored you used my song<3
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Hahahaha
Oh my god I love it, thanks so much, I'm honored you used my song<3
oh snap, I was wondering if and when you'd notice I used it.
lol, I made this when it was still in the 20 most recent submissions section. I happened to randomly stumble upon it and, after listening to it, instantly decided this movie had to be made.
Not too bad
Decently animated. Try using a smoother brush. Also be more careful about not breathing into the mic. Pretty good voice acting though.
Couldn't even sit through it...
Poorly animated sprites, obnoxious sound effects, and the slowest story ever. Id love to offer something positive but theres really nothing. sorry.
Lol
Its beautiful, funny and entertaining
Cool idea
Nice idea and decently executed but the aesthetics are completely offsetting
cool
It's a cool idea, pretty original. It's like finger twister. fun little gimmick.
Tough gimmicks rarely amount to much.
Fill it up
Lots of empty spaces, gotta fill up the track, know what i mean? more instruments and drums and shit. just needs more work haha
Yeah it's still pretty much a WIP.
solid piece
I listened to a few of your songs, and I must say, i love your use of samples. Those little snippets of random sound just make a song so much better with the added intricacy. Anyways cool track, but I'm not too fond of that snare sound, doesn't fit in with the tribal sound.
Well, I'm still trying to work this one out. I was actually wondering whether I should replace the snare or pan it more mono than it currently is (full stereo/surround snare? WTF was I thinking?) and make it fit better with the rest or the mix, so good catch. Maybe adding some sort of compressed, humanized cymbal sound in addition would work too? Dunno.
Thanks for sticking me on your fav artist list though, glad to see some people actually like my material.
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My only complaint is how much its leaning into the treble. I'd like it more with a fuller bass and mid section, cause it sounds a little squeaky how it is now.
Ew
Seriously? Come on. Learn anatomy, learn traditional, then stylize.
Its NOT watch animu, draw animu, draw animu naked fucking eachother in a goth world. Its just not art. Its kinda pathetic and it doesn't get you anywhere except fanpages all over the internet.
Theres just such an atrocious lack of detail, i mean even just the shapes - the face, that sickly waist. and that sideboob is like an undulating shiny mass. Looks to me like your ight source is on the left, but you decided to make everything shine just for the hell of it. Even going so far as to put some boob-shine in the middle of a boob-shadow.
The girl in the front, her rib cage curves outwards. Her right butt cheek protrudes and apparently is flat and has no curvature. her chin protrudes an extra few inches and ends in a knifelike tip. what the fuck is going on here man.
Its got a nice feel to it
It's got like a nostalgic winnie-the-pooh feel to it. It's kinda cool. However I think it could do with less matte surfaces and more texture. Also something about the placing of the birds nest is... odd. I mean in terms of perspective. It looks like it should be smaller, especially considering the perspective of that tree its on
Well
Looks to be unfinished. Textures on the man and the rocks are too stark. They need more blending and the rocks need more... rockiness. They look like folds of cloth. Give them more of a grainyness.
The woman looks a bit mannish but that does admittedly fit in with the art of the period (Not to sound like some historically accurate prick or anything).
One thing that really jumps out at me is the red cloth. It looks f'in wicked. Angular yet still soft. And the color just jumps. cool shit.
Also watch her elbow... just an awkwardly jutting angle there.
that's not a woman, it's an angel, wich is known not to have gender. about the elbow, i took i picture of myself to figure out how it would hold the sword, so i think the pose is valid. anyway thanks for the review.
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